Chips

FATTY, SALTY——but I just like it(them, it is more referring to an action) :P there are not so many alternatives of snacks(snack-alternatives is better, try to avoid using the of-form, because it makes sentences more complicated),but sometimes I do want to eat some snacks, and chips seem to be the most delicious one(kind of snack).

Why not candy? Not only because of my poor(do you mean to say "poor teeth", as in "I feel sorry for my teeth" or do you mean that your teeth are in poor condition? This way it sounds like you have bad teeth) teeth but also the taste, it could be(is, you are making a statement) too sweet to(for) me. Are your everyday meals sweet or salty, or (something) else? It shouldn't be sweet for most people (Most people don't prefer sweet)...I think the most common taste (preference) must be salty, then (come to=delete) sweet,spicy,acid(sour is better when talking about food, acid is the hard-core stuff) or something else, it depends on different(individual) places and families. So Chips would be a reasonable choice for me than(over) sweet candy:) (this paragraph doesn't completely make sense, or maybe it is just not factual. You mean to say that you don't like sweets, most people don't like sweets and prefer salt, so therefore chips is good for you?)

I don't like chips with too much salt and spice, otherwise(because , otherwise would mean that if you don't eat salty chips ... etc) I have to drink a lot of water, and it is bad for (my) health. Another reason I think I should not eat much(a lot of) chips is that my (facial=delete) skin becomes oil(y) and zits may(often.. may=formal) appear...

Even though there are 100 bad things about chips, I still like them, but there (are could be=delete)(should be) some way to decrease its bad effects to the health (its bad health effects). 1.when (you) want to eat chips, try small packaged ones(smaller packages). 2.have corn chips instead 3. do not go to (the) supermarket when hungry:P